问题描述：
英语作文评析,三级水平,正文如下,请指出错误,评改有道理的追加,
MyNewFriend
ThisismynewfriendMary.SheisAmerican,butshelivesinBeijingwithherparentsnow.Sheis12yearsold,andinClassTwoGradeSeven.Wearegoodfriends.
IofteneatmealswithMaryandherparents,shelikeseatdumplingsforbreakfast;meat,riceandvegetablesforlunch;forsupper,shelikeseatingnoodles.ShelikeseatingChinesefoodsverymuch.