直抒胸臆:我最喜欢的颜色-My Favorite Colour

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我最喜欢的颜色

直抒胸臆:我最喜欢的颜色-My Favorite Colour

【内容提示】

每个人都有自己所喜欢的颜色。你喜欢什么呢?白的,红的,黄的,蓝的,也或许是紫的。你喜欢某种颜色肯定有你自己的理由,而且见到这种颜色则爱不释手,依依不舍,甚至凡是你穿的、戴的、用的都可能是这种颜色。请你写一篇文章抒发你对某种颜色喜爱之情。

【作文示范】

My Favorit Colour

Of all th colours, I lik blu bst.

Blu is a nic-looking colour. How do you fl whn you wak up to find a gry sky? Dprssing①, I'm afraid. But whn th sky is blu, you fl joyous②, I'm sur.

Blu is th colour of sas, rivrs and laks on a sunny day. I lik swimming. vry tim I swim I hav a good tim.

I lik blu. So you can s that my pn, ball-pn③,pncil-box and so on ar all blu.

I lik blu, and many things of ours at school ar blu, too. Look, our bags, quilts ar blu, and so ar our school suits. vn th words on our school nvlops and writing papr ar printd in blu. Oh, I lik blu vry much, and I lik our intrnational school mor.

(选自《英语画刊》高中版1996年第11期)

【词语解释】

①dprssing [di'prsiR] a.压抑的;沉闷的

②joyous ['j&i+s] a.喜气洋洋的;高兴的

③ball-pn ['b&:l pn] n.圆珠笔

【写法指要】

作者直接抒发对蓝色的偏爱。第一句单独构成一段,简捷明快地说出自己最爱的是蓝色。然后,作者由远及近,由上而下抒发自已对蓝色的喜爱之情:先写天空的蓝色,再写大海河湖的蓝色,又写自己用具的蓝色,最后写学校物品的蓝色,这样,作者把自己对蓝色的热爱之情寄托在了各个方面。