问题描述：
帮忙修改英语作文（四级）
HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?
要求：1.面试在求职过程中的作用；2.取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是等等.
HowtosucceedinaJobInterview
Ithink,JobInterviewisveryimpotantwhenyoufindjobs.Firstly,InterviewJagecanknowyouaboutyourknowledge、confidenceandsoon;Second,youcanknowyourself'sweakness.
JobInterviewconsistsofmanyelements.Forexample,looks、apperence、ability、knowledge、confidenceandsoon.IthinkknowledgeisthemostimportantelementinJobInterview.Itisthebasicofourdoanyjobs.Andconfidenceisveryimpotanttoo.Onlyhaveweconfidence,wecandogoodjobs.Atlast,wemusttrust.Becauseifyouhavetrust,everyonewillappreicateyou,thenyouwillhavegoodjobs
付连续回答：
inmyopinon,JobInterviewisveryimpotantwhenyouseekforjobs.(find是找到的意思,不能表示寻找的过程）Firstly,InterviewJage?canhelpyoutoknowaboutyourknowledge、confidenceandsoon;Secondly,youcanknowyourownweakness.
JobInterviewincludemanyelements（如果用consistof我认为写成thesuccessofjobinterviewconsistof.,比较符合逻辑）,suchas（forexample后面要加句子的）appearence、ability、knowledge、confidenceandsoon.IthinkknowledgeisthemostimportantelementinJobInterview.Itisthebasicofourdoanyjobs.（我认为应该是itisthebaiscrequirementofeveryjob)Andconfidenceisveryimpotanttoo.Onlywhenwehaveconfidence,canwedogoodjobs.Atlast,wemusttrustotherpeople.Becauseifyouhavetrustthem,everyonewillappreicateyou,thenyouwill（can比较好）havegoodjobs
我认为第二段最好是讲自己的观点的时候,有自己的依据.希望能帮到你
