问题描述：
求改雅思作文
改下语法错误再看下大概几分可以吗
Wecangetknowledgefromnews,butsomepeoplethinkwecan'ttrustthejournalist,Whatdouthink?Andwhatdoyouthinkistheimportantqualitiesthatajournalistshouldhave?
Formostofus,mediaplayanimportantroleinourdailylife,wecanknownmanycurrenteventsthroughthem.Howevertherearemanyargumentsontheattitudeweholdtowardsthemedia.Personally,Iagreewiththepointofviewthatweshouldnottrustthejournaliststotally,nottheopinionthatweshouldnottrustthemanymore.
Admittedly,theissuehappenedrecentlythreatenthehonestofthepress.Caseinpoint,manyelectronicmediaareinundatedwithmediahype,misleadingmanypeople,justfortwopurpose:Letapersonbecomefamousorletthemediaitselfbecomepopular.Thesebehaviorshasrenderedthesocietyamaterialisticcircle,whichdoharmtoeveryrespectaroundus.
Thoughmanydisadvantages,Iconsiderthattheadvantageoftrustmediafaroutweigh.Indeed,manyjournalistsareobjectiveandbalanced,fromwhichwecanknowcurrentaffairsevensomescientificnewsaboutoutlife.Itisessentialthatweshouldknowtheknowthingshappenedoutside,whichhelpsuskeeppeacewiththesituation.Otherwise,themedianowadayscanrevealmanythingswhichcannotbefingoutsidebythepublic.Ifwedonottrustthesenews,howcanwefightthedarksideofthecommunity?Meanwhile,Ibelievethatmostofthereportsarefocusonbringingusobjectiveinformationinsteadofsensationalizethings.Onlybythesecantheydotheirjobcontinuously.Basedonsomeeventsofthejournalists’experience,undernocircumstancewillsomereportersmisleadingthepublic.Therearemanypeopleupholdthebaselineofmorality,whichcanensurethereliableofsomeevents.
Tosumup.Ithinkweshouldnotbelieveeverythingonthenewspaperwebsiteandsoon,buttheviewthatweshouldnotbelievethemtotallyistooabsolutize.